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Early Decision: Nov 7
You Have:
Regular Decision Deadline: Jan 5
The Requirements: Two short essays of 175 words and one essay of 350 words
Supplemental Essay Type(s): Why, Diversity
Amherst is giving you an opportunity to further distinguish yourself from other applicants—not with amazing test scores or impressive grades, but by painting a more detailed picture of who you are. Think about activities you enjoy, places that give you peace, or aspects of your personality or background that you haven’t discussed in your application yet and tell that story. Maybe you’d like to write about your experience growing up in a military family, competing in the Junior Olympics, or playing Mancala with your grandpa. The options are endless! Just be sure to tell admissions something about you that they don’t already know.
Activity essays like this one are more common than participating in icebreaker activities during your first week of college (that’s very common, you’ll see…). All things considered, the hardest part is selecting the activity you want to write about! So, we return to our favorite mantra: tell admissions something they couldn’t learn from anywhere else in your application. If you wrote your Common App essay about your time walking dogs for your local animal shelter, focus here on a different activity or work experience that reveals a new aspect of your personality. This can be a great opportunity to highlight your leadership skills and any awards or special recognition you may have received throughout high school. Were you nominated for an award after going undefeated with your doubles tennis partner? Were you asked to manage a team of volunteers at the food pantry based on your community-minded reputation and leadership skills? No matter what you choose, it should probably be something you’ve been involved in for a while, so you can demonstrate your growth and the impact that you have had on others.
This first prompt is a two-parter: First, admissions wants you to define curiosity in your own words. Second, they want you to describe how curiosity manifests in your life. Start by doing some free word associations or doodles related to curiosity. What comes up? Think about something that really captured your attention. What about that idea, person, or thing piqued your interest? Don’t just copy the Merriam-Webster definition of the word, but rather describe what the term means to you. Once you’ve explained your concept of curiosity, describe how you experience it in your daily life. Perhaps when you’re gripped by curiosity, you focus deeply on one topic to the exclusion of all other stimuli. Or maybe you start feverishly researching tangents until you’re so far down your Wikipedia rabbit hole you forgot how you even got there. (Those blue hyperlinks are so tempting…) The goal of this question is to show that you are a thoughtful person who can think deeply about intangible ideas and has a thirst for knowledge, information, and skills.
This is a Diversity Essay in disguise, perfect for students who have a unique background, identity, or interest that has impacted how they interact with the world. Maybe you grew up on a working farm and look forward to using your experience to educate your peers as an EcoRep in your dorm. Perhaps you’ve lived all over the world because your parent was in the Foreign Service and you bring a fresh perspective on American imperialism. You could also write about your race, nationality, or any other aspect of your background, personality, or experiences. Make sure to focus on not only what makes you unique, but also how that has primed you to educate your peers and make your mark on Amherst’s campus.
Whether it was during a pregame pasta party with your teammates, a long bus ride with classmates, or your family Thanksgiving dinner, odds are you’ve disagreed with someone about an idea or an issue—and Amherst wants to hear about it. Admissions wants to know not only how you went about engaging with someone with an opposing viewpoint, but also what you took away from the experience. To make sure your response stands out from the pack, be as specific and purposeful as possible. What did you disagree on and how did you communicate? How did you broach the subject and what was the outcome of your conversation? Maybe you used some deescalating tools you picked up from your psych major sister or, perhaps, you made an effort to see things from their point of view while still making a case for your perspective. Whatever conversation you decide to write about, remember to address what you learned from the experience. Were you surprised to discover how emotionally invested you were in the topic? Did you become a better listener or speaker because of this chat? Amherst wants to foster the kind of learning environment that encourages respectful discussions about beliefs and values, so show admissions that you’re game to learn, listen, share, and grow.
Okay, we’ll keep it short. Although this is technically an option, the wording should make it clear that admissions is really angling for a response to option A. We only see two sets of circumstances where an applicant might want to consider option B: (1) if you somehow procrastinated to the eleventh hour and have no time to write an original essay or (2) you have written something you are so proud of that it could have won an award (and maybe it did). Just make sure it is what admissions is asking for (a persuasive argument that calls upon literary, sociological, or historical evidence)⸺if not, you’re better off scrambling to write a response to one of the Option A prompts!
No explanation necessary! If you think that this essay will be the best way for you to represent yourself to Amherst admissions, then feel free to use it here. If it’s so nice, why write it twice?