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Early Decision: Nov 1
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The Requirements: Optional essays of 250 words each
Supplemental Essay Type(s): Why, Community, Diversity
Admissions wants to know that you value inclusivity and thrive in diverse settings. Unlike other Diversity Essay prompts, this one isn’t asking you to wax poetic about your own diversity; instead, Colgate wants you to talk about the benefits of a diverse community in general and how you will engage with their diverse community in particular. To ace this response, you’ll need to do a little research. Once you have a sense of Colgate’s culture, write about why you are excited to join this eclectic student body. Are you looking forward to getting involved in the ALANA Cultural Center to meet students from different backgrounds? Will you start an a cappella group focused on Bollywood music, introducing your culture to Colgate’s students? Are you excited to launch a monthly supper club with your future dorm-mates where you take turns sharing family recipes? However you approach this prompt, we encourage you to focus on how joining a diverse community will benefit your education.
Now is the time to get nerdy. This prompt is not only about your intellectual curiosity, but also about your interest in Colgate. First and foremost, be true to your motivations; there are so many reasons to study Econometrics & Quantitative Economics, for instance. Maybe you realized how important data was in analyzing your family restaurant’s fiscal performance and you’d like to expand your theories to a global scale. Perhaps you learned about the struggles facing developing nations on a church mission trip and got inspired to help come up with solutions to broad economic problems. Second, discuss what makes Colgate the ideal place to pursue your passion. How will their offerings and opportunities help you reach your goals? Is there a particular professor, course, internship, research lab, study abroad opportunity, or other part of the curriculum that excites you? Your goal here is to tell a cohesive story about your intellectual curiosity that demonstrates your fit with Colgate.
You’ve been limited to just 13 words for each answer, so you’d better make each one count! (No pressure or anything.) These prompts don’t have time for generalities or gentle introductions, so you’ll have to get straight to the point. The more specific your words are, the more likely they are to stick with admissions officers. If you can paint a funny picture or display a knack for wit, take this chance, but don’t force it; humor is not the only way to leave an impression. You also don’t have to think of this as filling in the blanks, but more like filling in any blanks still left in your application. Anything that doesn’t feel like it merits a full essay can go here as a hot take, punchline, or elegantly worded sentence. One word of warning: resist the temptation to write one or two-word responses to these; while admissions definitely cares about which historical figure you’d like to meet, they really want to understand why you chose that person, so aim for at least 7 words in response per prompt.